Wednesday, November 8, 2017

My Amazing Fantastic Persuasive Piece of Writing!!

Last week in Te Ngahere we wrote persuasive pieces of writing. Our WALT was to use the correct structure. I think I did well with my structure. I think I need to work on using more ideas. Here is my persuasive piece of writing:

Wednesday 18 October, 2017
WALT Use the correct structure for a persuasive text.
Should plastic bags be used at supermarkets?

Local people feel that using plastic bags are not good. What do you think? I think yes . . . why? You will learn in this article why.

Firstly, what would happen if we put plastic in the sea/ocean? Do you know? Well the plastic will go to sea life and they think it’s food. Here are 2 example: Turtles think it’s jellyfish then eat it and die, some sea life think it is little pieces are plankton so they eat it.

Secondly, if you put plastic in the water if birds swoop down they think it is fish. Also when they die people open them and there are about 45 pieces of garbage inside of the bird!! Most of it is plastic!!

Thirdly, the best option is reusable bags they are the best to use. Why? I think it is the best to use reusable bags because they are Eco friendly and you can use them when you are going shopping. Reusable bags are not only cheaper in the long term, but also save a ton of money in tax dollars because we aren’t spending as much on recycling.  

Now that you know which one is better do the world a big favor and stop using plastic bags and plastic!!

Friday, October 27, 2017

My Amazing Awesome Writing Goals!!!

Last week in Te Ngahere, we created writing goals. The WALT was to identify our next learning goals in writing. Here are some of my goals  adverbs, metaphor and complex sentences. I choosed my goals from the writing rubric.  I chose these goal because I didn’t know them. Here are my goals:

Wednesday, October 25, 2017

My Amazing Maths Goals!!

Last week in Te Ngahere we did a google drawing about our maths goals. We got our maths goals from our Ican sheet also, I had a stage 7 Ican sheet. I chose these goals because I need to learn them. So here are my goals:

Thursday, September 28, 2017

William Pike!!

Last week the whole of Te Ngahere watched a webinar about William Pike. We all learned lots of facts and to never give up even if you are hurt ( like William Pike hurt his leg). We learned about William Pike because he was a man in a story called Rep and his coach told him to look at the poster on the wall and to never give up. Here is my google drawing:

Tuesday, September 19, 2017

Awesome reading tasks!!

In week five my reading group read a book called Rep. Our WALT is to Answer inference questions. I think I did well and understood the questions. Here is my slide hope you enjoy:

Tuesday, September 12, 2017

The Bullet!!

A week ago my reading group (Cheyenne Kiana Lucy Lennix and I) did a reading task the title is calls Bullet. The WALT is to use a range of strategies to answer comprehension questions. Here are my Reading tasks:

Tuesday, August 29, 2017

My awesome India information report!!!

Four weeks ago in Te Ngahere we started to write information reports. The WALT is to write an information report. When we did another report we had to change our WALT. My WALT for my second piece of writing was to use Semicolons and Colons. The first thing is your title, next your introduction, after you have 3 to 4 subtopics then you do your conclusion and lastly, Topic specific words. Down below is my writing:

WALT : Write the structure for an information report
All About India
Have you ever wanted to go to In dia or wanted to learn about India? If so, read this article about India, it will inform you about the National Animal, the Population, the Celebrations they celebrate and the food they eat: this is all about India.
The National Animal of India
The National Animal of India is a Bengal Tiger. Here are some facts about the Bengal Tiger. The height of the Bengal Tiger is 90 - 110 cm at its shoulders. The length of the Bengal Tiger for a male is 2.7 - 3.1 m. The female length is 2.4 - 2.6 m. Fun Fact: The Bengal Tiger's roar can be heard as far as two miles away.
The PopulationThe Population in India is 1.324 billion in 2016. Did you Know!!Did you Know India is the 2nd most populated country in the world!!
India has many celebrations. Here are the top three Famous Festivals / Celebrations in India.
Diwali, Diwali is the most celebrated and most popular celebration in India. This celebration is celebrated all over the world. People wear new clothes and share sweets with friends, family and neighbors. This celebration is celebrated when the   darkest new moon of Kartik month of the Hindu lunisolar calendar. This celebration is celebrated for the new year for the Indanes.
Holi, Holi is when people sing and dance. This celebration is celebrated almost all over the country; this celebration can be seen in North Indian states.  This celebration is celebrated on the full moon (Purnima).
Dusshera it is on  10th day of the month of Ashwin according to the Hindu lunisolar calendar. Which corresponds(have a close similarity; match or agree almost exactly) to September or October of the Gregorian calendar. This celebration is celebrated in Pan India.
Cuisine (Food They Eat )
Lastly here are 3 Famous Indian foods : Butter Chicken, Chicken 65 and Chilli Chicken.
Butter Chicken: Butter Chicken is a India food that is made from Garam Masala, Ginger, Garlic, Lemon or Lime, Pepper, Coriander, Cumin, Turmeric and Chili. The chicken is cooked in a Tandoor (traditional clay oven)
Chicken 65 : Chicken 65 is a spicy the serving temperature is hot. The main ingredients are Chicken, Ginger, Garlic and Red Chillies. This type of dish is Merienda.
Chilli Chicken : The main ingredients are Chicken, Ginger and Garlic Paste and Lemon Juice. Chilli chicken is a spicy the serving temperature is hot. In this dish you are supposed to use boneless chicken but some people use chicken with bones. You eat chilli chicken with rice but you don’t have to.
In India there is a lot of very interesting food and celebrations. In this article you have learnt about the Population, Cuisine (Food They Eat ), the National Animal and Celebrations. If you are traveling to India you will be prepared for busking cities, great food and awesome celebrations.
Thank YouYuktha