The Attack from Humongous Trolls!!
Once upon a time, there were small and little trolls, that lived in a secret place, from the big, giant that is more humongous, than the trolls. Do you want to know where that secret place is? It is a forest with million of big trees, and millions of big bushes!!
They were having a humongous party! When all of a suddenly one of the humongous trolls came and stole some of the trolls, and went back to his town!!
The Attack from Humongous Trolls!!
Once upon a time, there were small and little trolls, that lived in a secret place, from the big, giant that is more humongous, than the trolls. Do you want to know where that secret place is? It is a forest with million of big trees, and millions of big bushes!!
They were having a humongous party! When all of a suddenly one of the humongous trolls came and stole some of the trolls, and went back to his town!!
But just as he was about to go. One of the small trolls, came out of hiding, and tried to free his friends, and guess what?? He freed them!! The humongous troll, never came back and that, was a day to remember, and they all lived happily ever after!!
The End!
I was learning to use descriptive language, punctuation and use the right structure. We had to do a descriptive character and then a descriptive setting then a narrative story then a screencastify and then a blog post. I think I need to still need to work on descriptive language in my writing.
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